Though there are some eye-roll inducing scenarios, such as when Colin comes upon her in the library in the middle of the night:
“I sat to attention, suddenly very conscious that I was wearing nothing but an ancient white tank top, washed to invisibility”
This scene, along with a number of times that Miles’s pants were suddenly “too tight”, were all rather too obvious, and clichéd for my taste, however they didn’t detract enough for me to stop reading. I think this is a fun series and I am interested to see how Colin and Eloise’s relationship develops. I'm looking forward to the third book in the series, The Deception of the Emerald Ring.